Comments on: Reasonable Doubt http://tracystwopence.wordpress.com/2007/08/24/reasonable-doubt/ ...and other strenous exercises Fri, 21 Aug 2009 14:09:52 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Peter Pawan http://tracystwopence.wordpress.com/2007/08/24/reasonable-doubt/#comment-4 Peter Pawan Sun, 26 Aug 2007 02:01:45 +0000 http://tracystwopence.wordpress.com/2007/08/24/reasonable-doubt/#comment-4 Can I be frank here? I could not read till the end because there were no paragraph breaks in between. The whole story was in two paragraphs (maybe its just the double spacing fooling my eyes). Your posts sound pretty interesting... but you need to subdivide your story into paragraphs. Yes it is readable. Of course. Very interesting. Paragraphs please. Hey what about the money? :) Can I be frank here? I could not read till the end because there were no paragraph breaks in between. The whole story was in two paragraphs (maybe its just the double spacing fooling my eyes). Your posts sound pretty interesting… but you need to subdivide your story into paragraphs.

Yes it is readable. Of course. Very interesting. Paragraphs please.

Hey what about the money? :)

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